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Not Dark Yet #365: "The garden of wilderness"

5/11/2023

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On Saturday evening, in the front parlour of 5 Cwmdonkin Drive in Swansea, the baritone Gareth Brynmor John and harpist Alis Huws performed Dylan, the song cycle by Michael Stimpson which sets to music works by Dylan Thomas, including Ceremony After a Fire Raid, a powerful poem he wrote in 1945 after a visit to Coventry. It concerns an innocent child, in its mother’s arms and burned completely. Listening to the live stream of this piece (it is #6 in the cycle), the parallels between what Thomas describes and tries to understand with what is happening in Gaza cannot be ignored.

It is an extraordinary poem, because it is a ceremonial in itself, in its own right. I urge you to read it because it feels as if an organ is playing it, as if a prophet is proclaiming it.

It is a personal response to the death of the child but it identifies the poet as part of the whole human race: “Myselves”, a Greek chorus of grievers, a collective of sadness and despair.

The child is not named. He or she is anonymous. A symbol of sacrifice. “Myselves” grieve and the grief itself is confessional. Grief is guilt. Grievers are also “believers”. The poet is the spokesperson. The poet is the priest.

Forgive
Us forgive
Us your death that myselves the believers
May hold it in a great flood
Till the blood shall spurt …


It is the poet - and through the poet, the people - that can say this, that can feel this, that can act on this.

Right now, the politicians are cynically playing with words, insulting us with passionless pretension and ruthless refusal to acknowledge the truth of the actions and reactions.

Beginning crumbled back to darkness
Bare as nurseries
Of the garden of wilderness.
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Today from the everysmith vaults: I need to declare an interest. Gareth Brynmor John is my nephew. I am listening again to his interview and performance with Alis on Radio 3. It is still available on Sounds (​In Tune 5pm Friday 3rd) and I commend it to you.
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PeterD
5/11/2023 11:12:23

Yes. Yes. Yes.

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Allan
5/11/2023 13:55:44

A surprise. After the plethora of Bob Dylan references and allusions last time, a compare and contrast with Dylan Thomas. But the point remains the same - the iniquity of present day politics. lies, lies, lies.

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Dan
7/11/2023 14:21:34

Only connect, Max. A neat - if desperately sad - connection.

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RichS
8/11/2023 17:56:32

It is a sad connection. But the connection itself and the reminder of the Dylan Thomas poem gives more force to what could be merely a comparison.

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